tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6047711944500938971.post1869784217973617656..comments2020-11-10T09:45:25.489+13:00Comments on Isara: The School PicnicPES Blog Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430434432980030044noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6047711944500938971.post-34551910854670707462012-03-06T09:45:21.534+13:002012-03-06T09:45:21.534+13:00That was great your whole story was awesome. I lik...That was great your whole story was awesome. I liked it when we played soccer and then went back to to the picnic spot and relaxed.<br /><br />Fantastic work IsaraJacob Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14432066730657140158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6047711944500938971.post-84243949029013154172012-03-01T15:29:19.280+13:002012-03-01T15:29:19.280+13:00I think you are mastering those introductions, wha...I think you are mastering those introductions, what a great hook. <br />That word 'aloud' is a tricky one, the word you used means 'out loud'. I think you mean 'allowed'Miss Gardenhttp://pesroom12and13.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6047711944500938971.post-62072731179738349792012-02-29T23:08:23.262+13:002012-02-29T23:08:23.262+13:00Hey what a great Hook Isara - nice work! I thought...Hey what a great Hook Isara - nice work! I thought you might have mentioned having dad at the picnic for the first time ever. <br />We were lucky to have such a perfect day for the picnic weren't we.<br /><br />Love MumMumnoreply@blogger.com