Monday, October 3, 2011

I Am The Whale


Frustrated that I couldn't get out of this huge net I was flapping my fluke and pectoral fins trying to get free but my pectoral fins where pined to the side of my body. I still couldn't get free so I decided to just float there waiting for help I was thinking mum or someone to help me. I heard some thing that i've never heard before I was still motionless it sounded like a rumble.

As the sound grew louder and louder, I could see something coming closer and closer. I soon realised  that it was a boat. I thought it was coming to kill me. Full of fear,I watched someone jump in the water with a knife. At this stage I thought I was going to die straight away but soon he started cutting the net I felt relived but I didn't expect a humane to help me.


2 comments:

  1. Hey Isara, one of my favorite creatures under water is a whale. I really like your sentence when it says, "As the sound grew louder and louder, I could see something coming closer and closer." I would love to see your next post.

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  2. whats up hey do you know that when you were try to spell were it was so post to be WERE instead of where. I think you should fix it up properly but anyhow just keep it up and try your best.

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