Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Adding to a sentence...

Feeling extremely exhausted I dragged myself out to the kitchen for some brekky. I pulled out a bowl ,seized some weet-bix ,drained the milk bottle and bam brown soggy weet bix.

1 comment:

  1. I love it Isara, this is the kind of writing that hooks a reader in. Keep adding detail and using interesting vocab and take the time to recraft every sentence. I'm looking forward to the next post!
    Mrs Nua

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