Can you guess what im writing about they are huge animals a type of primate the male is a silverback and they live in africa ? Yes they are gorillas. The biggest primate in the familly .
Gorillas natural habitat is tropical forests or sub tropical but only in Africa.Most gorillas live in lowland swamps except the mountain gorilla they still live in forests but up high in the mountains. They can reach an altitude of 2,200–4,300 metres that's pretty high.
Did you know that the gorilla is a relative of the human but even closer to us is bonobo or the common chimp.The DNA is so similar to a humans it is 95-99% well it depends on what you're judging.Gorillas live in a group called troops there is usually only one silverback (male gorilla) in a troop. However there is multi male troops but that is not too common.Male gorillas are called silverbacks because of their beautiful silver hairs on their back that comes from maturity. They also have larger teeth which also comes from maturity.silverbacks sometimes leave their troops to mate with females and make a new group.
I like the way your introduction orientates, as well as hooks in your audience. I was wondering if we could work on the sentence construction though...
ReplyDeleteYour question is
Can you guess what I'm writing about?
The next part are a list of clues (a different sentence)
They are huge animals, a type of primate, the male is a silverback, and they live in Africa.
Wow Isara you did do alot of finding out! I thought you might have included that your Mum and Dad have been up close and personal with the Gorillas in Uganda! I love Gorilla's too, it's a shame they have become the target of poachers. Did you read anything about a lady who spent years studying and living close to the gorillas?
ReplyDeleteI hope you're going to take Ms Garden's advice and do a little bit of recrafting.
Mum x